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Rainbow Dash tugged the foil off the stick of gum with a ripping sound. Knowing Fluttershy was staring at her, she slowly licked along the bared gum. "This get you off, Fluttershy?"

Her friend simply stammered, blushing as she watched. She was unable to take her eyes away as Rainbow Dash used her tongue alone to lift it off the table and onto her tongue.

Then she started to chew it, first with her front teeth, then slowly moving it between her molars, displaying each motion to the turned-on Fluttershy.

Rainbow Dash then spat it onto the ground and crushed it beneath her heel, grinding into it. The pink-haired pony fainted.
Rainbow Dash shows Fluttershy her moves.

A My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction.
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:iconwriteinshiningarmour:
Isn't this just megasweet's comic written out in words?
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No, MegaSweet's comic is my text done in pictures.

It was a nice compliment, and took a while to get done. There's archived 4chan threads to this effect.

[link] I used to be known as TrainingWritefag. This work is present in those threads, and MS's comments on adapting this work is there as well.

Or you could just ask him yourself.
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:iconwriteinshiningarmour:
Oh! Well in that case, nevermind.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay. We all make mistakes
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Patt-Ytto Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
I've no idea what the gum is supposed to represent.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
...me either. The prompt was erotic gum-chewing.

Perhaps it's female genitalia?
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Patt-Ytto Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
I really don't think it's female genitalia. I thought so at first, but in my years of active sexual life, i still can't compare that square block of gum to a round clitoris, but maybe it's vaguely represented i don't know.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
True.

...maybe it's just representative of future genitalia, and Fluttershy is reacting based on memories of the far future encoded into the potentialities of her DNA.

...that'd be cool, designing future genitalia designed for pleasure. :D
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Patt-Ytto Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
No i think i get it now, nipples! You lick and chew them and they feel nice.

...For some girls, at least.
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