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Pinkie Pie hopped along the dirt path, happily humming a tune she had composed just this morning. The party plans were coming along perfectly. Even though she had no experience with organizing small affairs like this one, she thought she had a good handle on what was needed. Instead of a hundred balloons, twenty. A few streamers and one banner inside the room, as opposed to lavishing the whole house with colorful cloth. She trotted over to Fluttershy's home, brimming with pride at her skills in the art of partay. "Knock knock!" Pinkie chirruped gleefully.
A soft voice answered through the closed door, "Um, who's there?"
"Orange!"
"…Orange who?" She now opened the door a bit.
"Orange you glad that our party's this weekend?" Her brilliant smile nosed its way inside her house. The quiet pony backed up to let her inside.
"I, uh, guess…?" Fluttershy's cheeks turned the shade of her guest's skin.
"I even wrote a song for the event!" She took a pitch pipe out of her hair with her teeth and blew a note. Dropping it, she opened her mouth wide to belt it out. "Uh…Pinkie Pie?"
Pinkie Paused, mouth agape. "'Es?" she said, not shutting it.
"Um…you, you see, I'm not sure I mumble mutter mutter…"
The party girl shut her mouth and leaned closer. "…could you speak up?"
"I, uh, dunno about, um…you know…" Fluttershy stared at the floor. Was there a piece of candy down there? Pinkie checked it out, coming closer. Nope. Just floor. Could use a bit of sweeping later. She then nudged under her chin, so she could meet her eyes.
"It's okay…it's just me here. Nopony's gonna get mad." Their eyes met, if only for a brief moment.
"…I'm afraid they won't like me anymore." She sniffled, eyes starting to tear up. "I mean, it took me such a long, long time to make the ones I have…"
She started as she received a gentle kiss to her forehead. "It'll be okay. I know that some meanypantses out there wouldn't like us, but we're not inviting them." She smiled warmly. "Twilight's from Canterlot, a biiig city, and they're familiar with ponies like us. Quite cosmafalutin, as Rarity would say. And SHE works in the fashion industry, and…well, most of those people are like our sea serpent friend in the Everfree Forest. And Rainbow Dash…?" She giggled. "Trust me, she'll be happy for us."
"…what about Applejack?" The pink pony frowned.
"Weeelll… I really don't know. She's really good at sticking by her pals, but…she's also stubborner than a mule. And reeeally straightforward." Fluttershy nodded. "…she's a good friend, though. She will probably be a little confused at first, but with all of us helping her out, like buds should…? We'll bring her around."
Hesitantly, she took a step towards her. "So, you…you really think it'll, um, be okay…?"
"I know it. And…" Pinkie bit her lower lip. "…even if they all decided to stop being your friend…I'm here." She looked into her eyes. "I've been here for you since Filly Finishing School. I helped you make your first friends, even though you were afraid. We've been friends for so long….." She blushed. "…and I hope we'll be lovers for even longer."
Fluttershy smiled brightly, making the other melt inside. It was such a tender smile…and it was just for her. "I love you too." Then she leaned forward and kissed Pinkie Pie deeply. She had eaten a lot of pastries, puddings, and an assortment of other desserts over the years: but none could match the sweetness of Fluttershy's soft mouth.
Pinkie Pie is setting up a party, but Fluttershy is not quite sure she wants to go.

A My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction.
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KandyTooth Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I liked it though i'm a TwiPie Person. Cute and made me hungry :D
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Gubergieger Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Student Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~!
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chiyoXosakafan Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
Awwww also Fluttershy demands sequel :iconflutterrageplz: :iconsaysplz: DO IT!!!
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linings Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
What is it and fanfic writers always making rainbow dash gay, or hinting at her being gay.Of all the shippings I read there is probably one or two that portraits Rainbow Dash straight.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's a common interpretation of her character, and since this one concentrated on FSxPP, I thought it wouldn't hurt to assume that. I'm not married to her being gay.

Plus, there's quite a few straight!Dash fics on Equestria Daily, I thought.

(To be honest, my real OTP is PPxFSxRD. I just never got around to writing it. ...I probably should.)
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PatRoison Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is such a sweet story! PinkieShy is such a cute pair. Though to be honest I tend to find almost any pair with Fluttershy super cute! :D
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Werewolf-Hero Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh this was so cute :glomp:
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SpeccySY Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Flutterpie :heart:

I have no idea how I havent found this earlier >.>
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Ziddia Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, so nice...
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Musicoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011
D'aaaaaww
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The-Letter-J Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
The way you avoided saying that they were in a relationship made me hope that we were supposed to think they were and that it was a coming out party, but it would really be something completely different. Oh well, it's still a cute little story that I enjoyed reading (though I do kinda wish it wasn't quite so short).
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Fangirl-45 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Even though I don't ship this, this is great. I really agree with all the reasons Pinkie said.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! It's rather amazing those reasons stood up, after all those new episodes too.
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Skellow Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, thats just SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Cute!!!!
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x2Neon Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
....D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!

I can't stand the mushy stuff...but these ponies...they're tearing me apart.
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nekobladen Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Student Writer
I had no idea what was going on in the beginning, but around the early middle of they conversation it was all to clear. I heard PPXFS was still new and not fanfics of it yet. I kinda like them together, its a good juxtaposition.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The initial incomprehension was key to its effect. So yay!

And I wrote this months ago, honestly, because I wanted to show they could work.
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nekobladen Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Student Writer
MLP has been around that long!? *kicks self* I still remember seeing bits of the first ep when it aired thinking -what the heck- never watched it again till my lil sis wanted me too. Its been a super-Bromance ever sence between us. (me and mlp:fim lol). they work! when you tell it they do anyway ^.^
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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thelovelypenguin Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
A bit short, but still sweet.
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Arc-Tempest Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
deer gawd.

I weeped manly tears of awesome.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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Solaris90 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, so sweet!:D
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I have ideas for how they met, and for how they become parents (I know that's terrible, but I plan for them to have a daughter who's sorta psychic and trying her best to be an angsty goth, despite all the love she gets).
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Solaris90 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, that sounds like a great idea. An angsty pony... XD
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MCmkII Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2011
Very sweet and a nicely in character. Two thumbs!
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TuxedoChuck Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2011
More like two hooves, don'cha think?
But we can all agree, this is just adorable.
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Badgerhead Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
It deserves a sequel if possible XD
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It probably does. But then again, I'm thinking PREQUEL here now.

Like, how the two got together. That itself would make for an interesting story...

...Shit. I hate having all these ideas. Do you want some?
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Badgerhead Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
A prequel would work great too!

What do you have in mind?
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
A little something describing how they got together romantically. Probably interspersed with their first meeting in Filly Finishing School, to boot.
I'll work on it.
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TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
I love you for this. :heart:

PPxFS, OTP~:heart:
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NMD-JSD Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was a really cute little short story. Kinda wish there was more to it. I wanna know what happens~

Ah well, it was still good, all the same.
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BrotherPrickle Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well...I do have a story plotted out about these two. ...except it's more about THREE. RDxPPxFS. Might not be to your taste, but I plan to keep it clean.
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EbonMane Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
That sounds awesome. Triad relationships bring me much joy. I hope you get around to putting it all together; I'd love to read it.
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NMD-JSD Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd still love to read it if you ever get around to it. Sounds like a cute concept for a story.
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